Angel of Death

Hello Kylan!!! First off, let me just say that I love your stories about death and torture (hope that doesn't make me sound evil,) But really its great that you're ...

I haven't read many pieces by you but I think this is my favorite by far. Wow the way you incorparate the two cultures is amazing, its like meshing chopsticks ...

I really liked this and I sorta kinda get it. Ok, so you're in London and you're looking at a painting of the late princess Diana and the painter is ...

Awww this was really sweet and whomever you wrote this to is really lucky because this is beautiful and it truly flows nicely. I have no complaints but I think ...

Ello there, Well, as my friend Jig mentioned, its not truly original but I feel that you can shape this into anything that you'd like. Your vocabulary is amazingly good ...

Hey BBB!! Did you know that almost half of the time your work is displayed in the corner at the top of the page? Well anyways, I saw this piece ...

Wow so this is what she did to deserve the judgment, by the way there's no 'e' in judgement. Well anyways, I liked the way her thoughts were still frazzled ...

Hey KJ!!! Well I'm back and I'm still enjoying this story because its so real and your characters are believable. I have no complaints about this chapter because I didn't ...

Oh Ash, why? I was started to like Adam and then you ripped him away from us? Fantastic!!! Okay I know that expression would sound harsh but in literary context ...

Bravo Kylan!! You're really improving on your details and descriptions in each part you add to this series. I like this piece mainly because I was wondering what was happening ...

Bravo!!! I liked this piece very much and I think that this story is going well. I forgot to look up at the top to see what tense this is ...

Hello ashleylee, Well I must say that this story is indeed beyond beautiful that I'm not even going to waste my time typing about how I love your characters and ...

Well its been a while KJ but the wait was worth it. I loved this chapter! Its amazing how you bottle Hope's emotions up and just let it spill out ...

Hey Kylan, Well I can't say that I liked this better than the first one but this was amazing nonetheless. You're descriptions and your poetic voice are truly amazing, as ...

As those before me said, I believe that this poem has no obvious meaning, well not to us of course because only you know why you decided to write this. ...